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  1. #1

    Read one of my originals

    . . .no. . .music. . .just. . .words. . .

    . . .I dont know why I push you back. . .
    . . .I dont know why I let the pain stack. . .
    . . .I'll tell you yeah it hurt so much. . .
    . . .too bad though a diamond in the rough. . .
    . . .I'll tell you "sorry" but what will that do??. . .
    . . .I'm still not the one who you come home to. . .
    . . .that night you cried and I watched in awe. . .
    . . .deep inside I felt as I saw. . .
    . . .your tears fall down unto your cheeks. . .
    . . .made my stomach churn the pain reached the peak. . .
    . . .I wanted to look away and just forget. . .
    . . .that you cried and I didnt regret. . .
    . . .but why in the world do I treat you this way??. . .
    . . .please make it kick into you're mind like "hey". . .
    . . ."maybe he still loves me that's why he's like that". . .
    . . .but I know it isn't easy just looking back. . .
    . . .you're now a lost cause that I'll keep coming to. . .
    . . .but even after all these months I still wish too see you. . .
    . . .so I just left that night leaving you all alone. . .
    . . .though you called my name like we were on the phone. . .
    . . .I pretended not to hear a single word you said. . .
    . . .but I'll tell you the truth I still cry on my bed. . .

    comments??. . .
    Last edited by psychogist; 16th Jun 2010 at 22:29.

  2. #2

    Default Re: one of my originals

    three cheers for depressing poems!!
    what if we made a thread for poets?
    it's the best we can do..

    bummer..
    Last edited by vandike; 4th Feb 2008 at 21:42. Reason: coz me and psycho, er, ok symba rocks!!! wooooo

  3. #3

    Default Re: one of my originals

    tagal na nito ha. . .

    hhhmmm. . .

    may gumawa na ng ganun na thread ha. . .

    yung Post your poems here. . .na thread. . .


    ganun ba yung naiisip mo??

  4. #4

    Default Re: one of my originals

    ayos toh ah..

    @psychogist

    salamat pala ulit sa Wierd Al huh

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