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    Default Aisle

    Second poem ko ito na ipopost ko dito.

    Naglinis kasi ako ng kwarto at nakita ko ang aking notebook kung saan ako nagsusulat ng draft para sa novel. Chika lang. Frustrated writer kasi ako =) Tapos ayun nga, nakita ko ito. Nagawa ko `to three years ago pa.


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    It was one great sunny Sunday
    Prettily walking with my full-length gown
    I saw you standing at the end of the aisle
    Looking good with your formal attire


    I never thought it could hurt like this
    And neither that I would cry like this
    Its just your love I had ever wished
    Why should I be the one hurting like this?


    This is somehow like what's in my dream
    The only difference is that I'm not your dream
    It hurts so much knowing that after an hour,
    You'll be married.. To my bestfriend my love.

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    Default Re: Aisle

    wala ng mas sasakit pa sa pakiramdam na yung mahal mo ay nasa piling na ng iba... at sa best friend mo pa

    well written... ilabas mo pa yung iba mong gawa katkat

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    Default Re: Aisle

    Quote Originally Posted by 16MinutesLate View Post
    wala ng mas sasakit pa sa pakiramdam na yung mahal mo ay nasa piling na ng iba... at sa best friend mo pa

    well written... ilabas mo pa yung iba mong gawa katkat
    hehe. thanks. di naman sya maganda eh. pero salamat sa comment slash feedback =)

    Quote Originally Posted by King 0f Kings View Post
    ouch.. ~_~"
    salamat po sa pagbasa =)

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